| 2017-08-19 12:15:25 |
Tuition Fees
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I hope there is a second chapter coming soon. |
| 2017-08-23 03:40:22 |
Reborn to be Better_(1)
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Good work. Keep interested throughout the story. How you got me as a reader to to understand Jason reasons he wants to reprogram his sister. |
| 2017-08-28 12:55:59 |
The Collar 4
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I don't know where I got James because I know the husband's name is Brian. |
| 2017-08-28 12:27:38 |
Teacher's Pet (part 3)_(1)
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I read all three chapters so for. I am impressed with the story. There is a small gap between chapters 2 and 3 but I can petty much see what happen there. I think I know where this is going. Emily will happily become a submissive to her parents, it may or should somehow involve Jasmine. Could even interesting that Jasmine needs to somehow spend a weekend or more with them. I have spoken in may kids friend in due to events in their families lives. Please continue this fine story, I can see some good long multiple chapter this can go. Have fun with it. Look forward for more, hopefully soon. |
| 2017-08-28 14:10:45 |
Going on Vacation Pt 6
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Damn we may never know what happens. Ther author of the series has not been on line for about 4 years. Love to have read what happen before the end of the vacation. |