| 2015-09-26 00:48:03 |
My Very First Time_(2)
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It was kind of a good story, if you can get beyond the poor spelling, atrocious grammar, and.lack of paragraphs which make it so very hard to read without getting lost. Still, must give a negative vote. Take a writing course or at least use spell check, Microsoft Word or something then p4o9f read your shit. Then, if still looks like shit.... delete it before you publish it. |
| 2015-09-26 01:39:59 |
Going Back Home to Lose My Virginity to Virgins
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Great story. Sad about the friendship ending though. And your writing skills are pretty good. Much better than many. |
| 2015-09-26 13:48:46 |
A Perfect Thunderstorm
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This couldn't be a better scenario. I love thunderstorms, and I want so badly to fuck my beautiful daughter. She is even about the same age as the young woman in this story. Perfect. I need to show her this one. Please... More... |
| 2015-10-09 21:03:19 |
An incest birthday chapter 10
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You losing me with the bullshit. A deer, an herbivore, runs off with a back pack full of beef jerky? Dad finds out about the incest affair, but it was just a fucking dream? For fuck sake! |
| 2015-10-06 01:33:43 |
An incest birthday chapter 6
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Too much sex? What site do you think you are on? KELLEY BLUE BOOK Auto Values? Jeebus Toast! |